There are several thesis sentences that I have considered for my two profile essays. For the first essay on career goals I want to express the importance of having career goals and include the dedication that comes along with it. The first thesis I have created is as follows, “Lucia is a student at a local Community College who has a prominent plan to graduate college at the top of her class in hopes of having a successful career that she is inspired by.” Another quote I have considered is, “For one to accomplish their career goals it takes a drive within to overcome any obstacles that may arise.” For the second essay I wanted to describe Lucia as an interesting person and I have also written two thesis sentences for this essay. The first one I wrote was, “Lucia is a positive young woman that has hopes, dreams, ambitions that she wants to overcome and is consistently working in the right direction to overcome the odds.” The second one I wrote for the magazine essay is as follows, “Lucia is a creative, hard working individual who has many hopes and dreams she is striving to accomplish.” The following options are clear thesis sentences for both essays.
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